Dear diary
Well,i guess i was expecting quiet a situation here ,i am terribly afraid that mother will not accustom to my soon to be husband ,i have not a clue if there conversation was the awful cause of this .Jack is the one i decide to spend the rest of my life with.I know i'd rather love someone more if the person be named earnest,jack isn't...and i'm quiet o.k .I feel it is my ultimate destiny to meet and marry someone of the name earnest,strong honest and willing ,yes...that would be exactly him .Although the other day jacks proposal was such a pleasant surprise ,even though i would have liked him to be more romantic and sincere about it, it was really all i'd expect from such a man;my man .
He is the very aspect of what i am all about,kind caring and affectionate ...isn't that what girl could do for in our age and time ,men cant honestly be asked to give more then that ,right?
and why on earth would jack ask me why i could possibly like the name earnest,as if he could see through my very mind ,yes.I do like the name ,very much ...is that what you'd prefer to hear,jack? that i imagine you to be someone you quiet frankly aren't.Along with this ,i find it very strange that the notifications and connection of jack and and earnest have being appearing up in conversation a lot ,maybe its my over analytic mind but that evening he asked me about the name ,earnest ...i then heard it from Cecily ;not to mention the brother jack kept in the dark .
i believe there are many explanations for jacks interesting secrecy ,it is really and utturly fascinating being with him,and going on with many lists of things i would find of him,will really do me no good .It makes me more anxious of him. I cant say much of what i would want and what i would terribly like ,but i do know that i can at least talk to my mother ,about jack because this marriage is going through and what i might say or do for it to happen ,will just about be erratic .
LANGUAGE
12 years ago
www: Good expressive writing for Gwendolen which is associated with the play
ReplyDeleteEbi: include more reference to the situations that Gwendolen is involved
in.
www an attempt to write in the voice of Gwendolen.
ReplyDeleteebi the big issue again here is fluency of written English. You must use capitals for I and for proper names. I think you mean quite not quiet. A further misunderstanding - Gwendolen doesn't know that Jack is Jack and not Ernest until Act 2 and this diary entry is in Act 1. This indicates that you need to really know the text well and write appropriately.