I am slightly concerned about my daughters rather interesting taste in men .Upon meeting with jack the other evening,i must say that the fact that he was born in a cloak room startled me ,and to add on to the horror ...he has no relations .You would think if he had the audacity to ask for my daughters hand in marriage that he would have at least some higher guardian to speak of.I must confess ,that i have quiet a high expectation with men ,especially men whom want to marry my dearest daughter,and i am having some trouble telling whether jack would fit into my self proclaimed list of eligible men .
One of the things i have noticed very recently is the close relationship bonding with Cecily and my Gwendolyn ,never have i thought the two would be such great friends,and all too fast!with jack as her guardian it is quite strange, wouldn't you agree, Gwendolyn has expressed to me some worries about this, Cecily being very attractive and so,my dear daughter is quiet afraid that jack will be whisked away from her.not a chance in the world, Gwendolyn,as i am myself,is perfectly capable of keeping someone on a tight leash,even if ...i where to allow her to marry this man that's is .
I mean,you'd have to be practically very eligible ,to be asking for her hand in marriage ,in this society we live in today,mothers and daughters are only to walk in each others steps .As successful as i was at marriage ,i would only want the very same for my Gwendolyn . And i know that i could possible do something for her poor friend Cecily ,i'm sure her and algernon will be a perfect match ,and perfect distraction from Gwendolyn's worries ,i'm very sure .
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12 years ago
www entertaining and credible response. You have certainly given Lady B a voice and it works on several levels.
ReplyDeleteebi less errors than before but still too many. Some simple things like using the first name for Mr Worthing and Miss Cardew - Lady B wouldn't. The timing of the speech/discussion is also unclear - It must be between Acts 1 and 2 because Act 3 runs on from Act 2 and Lady B appears here. The resolution is achieved and the characters find their places in the social order - so Gwendolen couldn't have met Cecily?
A little more clear thought and you will raise your level.